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really wish you had a page that says "i didn't find anything" then give us the option to go back during those blank paths. besides that great story

The storyline seems interesting and would be cool to see how it develops.

However, a lot of the answers do not have other pathways yet.

Bugs Describe briefly and accurately any bugs (errors or problems) you spotted in your test

Second page of text isn't fully visible unless in fullscreen.

Strengths (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What are the best parts of the game?

Storyline is strong and narrative is detailed

Weaknesses (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What is the weakest part of the game?

Only one of the routes is fleshed out and it isn't finished, there is also no visuals.

Changes or Improvements Are there any (small and reasonable) changes or improvements you would recommend?

Complete the pathways other than sons room and also add graphics.

Bugs Describe briefly and accurately any bugs (errors or problems) you spotted in your test

The second page of text goes outside of the lower border and can't be read unless the player changes to fullscreen.

Strengths (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What are the best parts of the game?

I think the narrative is unique and has potential to be quite strong.

Weaknesses (visual style, animations, sounds, gameplay) What is the weakest part of the game?

The weakest part of the game is currently the spelling and grammar of the text, small errors such as typos take a lot away from the immersion

Changes or Improvements Are there any (small and reasonable) changes or improvements you would recommend?

Fixing up the small mistakes in the text would be a big improvement and wouldn't take very long to do.

Some coding could be added to automatically make the game open in fullscreen